What do you want to talk about? Influential people? That’s perfect, let’s talk about Henry David Thoreau and Niccolò Machiavelli. Both men are unfortunately not with us, but their writing still is. I like going out for dinner so let’s pretend that time machines exist and that I can have dinner with them. Just close your eyes…
Oh, good morning! Sorry you couldn't join us last night,
it was an incredible experience. Do you have a minute? Great, I’ll tell you
about the conversation.
First off, let me say that I think Thoreau was probably popular in
high school. He’s a people person. He believes in power to the people. The
government should make people’s lives better, not be an anchor dragging them
down. On the flip side is Machiavelli. Machiavelli believes that leaders are
entitled to do whatever is necessary to maintain power. It’s perfectly fine for
rulers to be cruel and ruthless because that’s what helps them be successful.
In his mind, exhibiting those traits is just part of the job.
I wanted to pick their brains so I asked questions about
rebellion. I told the two gentlemen about Egypt’s revolution, and asked for
their opinions on it. Thoreau was thoroughly thrilled. He said, “a minority is
powerless while it conforms to the majority, but it is irresistible when it
clogs by its whole weight.” Then he proceeded to express his pleasure in the
Egyptian people’s drive and determination to change their situation. People
can’t be afraid to take a stand, even if their opinion isn't the
popular one. However, Machiavelli was not so happy. He told me he thought
the Egyptian leader was weak. He quoted his writing when he said, “let the
prince pretend to be whatever he needs to be--as long as he effectively
maintains his position of power.” He concluded that the Egyptian
leader had not been following that logic, which is why he was overthrown.
Later on I posed an ancient question; does the end justify the
means? Just as before, I received two very distinct responses. He said, “power
is the end or goal, and whatever means are necessary to acquire and preserve
that power are entirely justified.” A well-maintained nation comes at a cost,
but that cost allows the nation to be prosperous. Thoreau was pretty upset
about Machiavelli’s opinion. He brought up the topic of slavery in America. The
purpose of bringing in slaves was to increase productivity in American homes. However,
while that’s all fine and pretty, that doesn't justify the
enslavement of thousands of human beings. It was still unjust and wrong, no
matter how prosperous it made America.
That dinner changed me. After I went home I sat for a long time
reflecting on what Thoreau and Machiavelli had told me. On one hand, successful
leaders are vital in maintaining a strong nation, but the happiness and
well-being of the people has to be taken into account as well. What would
really be successful is some sort of combination of the two. That made me truly
consider the last thing Thoreau said, “is a democracy, such as we know it, the
last improvement possible in government?”
This blog was really cool. I like how you gave information to the reader about the two writers as if you were talking to them. You used quotes from the text to support your statements and even predicted how you thought they would feel about present day issues. Really nice job.
ReplyDeleteNice blog - I like the story in which you told your response! The way you talk to and make "conversation" with the intended reader is very reminiscent of The Reluctant Fundamentalist, I thought it was quite creative.
ReplyDeleteI also thought your support of both Machiavelli and Thoreau's philosophies was well-presented through the guise of the current events that have happened/are happening in Egypt, as well as the that time-honored question: do the ends justify the means?
If I had to give any critique at all I would say that perhaps Thoreau wouldn't be so indignant to some expedient "means" (though this is my interpretation of his saying that a machine will encounter friction from time to time) and maybe the claim in the second paragraphed could be more three-dimensional. Otherwise, this blog was artistic and original and I really enjoyed reading it.